__ __ _ _ _ __ __ _ _ _ _ | \/ | | | | \ | | | \/ (_) | | (_) | | \ / | __ _ _ __ __ _| |_ ___ _ _ | \| | ___ | \ / |_ ___ ___| |__ _| |_ ___ _ _ | |\/| |/ _` | '_ \ / _` | __/ __| | | | | . ` |/ _ \ | |\/| | / __/ __| '_ \| | __/ __| | | | | | | | (_| | | | | (_| | |_\__ \ |_| | | |\ | (_) | | | | | \__ \__ \ | | | | |_\__ \ |_| | |_| |_|\__,_|_| |_|\__,_|\__|___/\__,_| |_| \_|\___/ |_| |_|_|___/___/_| |_|_|\__|___/\__,_| __ ___ _ _ ___ __ | _| _ \_ _ ___| |_| |_ _ _| _ ) ___ _ |_ | | || _/ '_/ -_) _| _| || | _ \/ _ \ || | | | ||_| |_| \___|\__|\__|\_, |___/\___/\_, | | |__| |__/ |__/__| Release #004 Notice / O-shirase ================== The original images are packaged as PNG32 (i.e. PNG files with a color palette of 32 colors). For editing, it will be necessary to transform these into grayscale images or RGB (so fonts will have the necessary smoothing) but please *ensure* that your final cut is saved and exported as PNG32. I would like to translate _most_ of the SFX for this release, so it becomes a staple of our high-quality releases. We may ignore the SFX which are more difficult to clear. Recommended Fonts ----------------- We have (in the past) used a font-size that you could read at 100yds. However, I would like to see how a smaller font looks on the final product. Mostly this concerns the esthetics and spacing of fonts inside the dialogue bubble, so a smaller font would allow for more padding and (I believe) a more read-able book. That said, the fonts for this work will be: - "PassingNotes Medium" @ 40pt for dialogue (https://www.dafont.com/passingnotes.font) - "All things Pink Skinny" Italicized @ 35pt for side-banter (https://www.dafont.com/all-things-pink.font) - "The Urban Way" for SFX (https://www.dafont.com/the-urban-way.font) - "JackLantern" for nervous stuff (https://www.dafont.com/jack-lantern-bb.font) - "MouthBreather BB" for moans / whatever (https://www.dafont.com/mouth-breather-bb.font) Transcript ========== The rest of this document is a transcript of the doujinshi with notes. Please use the hearts that I have left in the textboxes <3 I normally use a few expressions for typesetting: * = Bolded text _ = Italicized text 004.png (finished) ------- 1 Okay~! Everyone, 2 That's it for today~ 3 *Eli-chi* 4 Nice work today, these drinks are complements of the staff! 4.5 (All Things Pink) Have either one you like 5 Thanks Nozomi 6 Since all the photos are done will you go swimming with us? 7 (All Things Pink) Taste them and pick your favorite 8 Sounds refreshing, I think I'll tag along 9 (All things Pink) Take a pick 10 This one 11 Ah, this one is lemon squash <3 12 Eli? 005.png (finished) ------- 1 Umi! I loved watching your session with that cute swimsuit! 2 T-thanks... I'm glad to hear... 3 Having our photos taken in those s-swimsuits was a little embarassing 4 Why's that~? They're always only printed in girls' magazines... And you were wearing one the other day too, right? 5 T-that was only for the PV! 6 And besides, I didn't look nearly as good as you or anyone else out there! 7 That made me shy away a little today 8 Did it now? 8.5 (PassingNotes Thin) How cute <3 9 Anyway, u's isn't that popular or very well-known 10 I think we'll really take off from here, though 11 I think so too 12 In any case~ Your confidence and beauty today were striking... 13 It even gave me goosebumps, you know 14 Huh? You really think so? 15 At least _I_ think so... but, now, what would you do if I struck back? 16 Ufufu 17 Ehh? 006.png (finished) ------- 1 Do you remember that one time... with the love letter... <3 2 ...?! 3 Don't say that! You masochist! 4 Masochist? 5 You... you're wrong about that 6 But you're flush-red and you look like you're going to say something with your arms raised like that... 7 Could I be falling in love with you? Oh, what am I saying <3 [=^_^=] 8 H-h-h-huh? /// 9 (Bold) E-eli! Don't pull my leg like that! 10 A-ha-ha, sorry <3 11 Seiously, what gets into you sometimes, Eli? 12 Eh, are you fine? Do you want some juice? 12.5 (smaller font) I already drank more than my fair share... 13 T-thanks Eli 007.png (Finished) ------- 1 Oh man, I went a little too far... 1.5 (Smaller font) That's something Nico would have said... Oh I wish I hadn't... 2 Hmm? 3 (Bold) Eli~ 4 You're always so to-the-point, but this time you've gone too far 5 *Hick* 6 Huh? 7 Eh? 8 U-u-u-umi?! You're drunk? Off of that? 9 It's high-time you realize that it's not so easy... 10 We should just go ahead and spend some time alone <3 11 U-umi! W-wait a second! 12 Wa! 13 Waaaa! 008.png (Finished) ------- 1 Oh my, I'm sticky all over 2 There's no way that Umi got _that_ faded from that carbonated water 3 What was that noise? 3.5 (Tiny font) Who's footprints are these? 4 (Handwritten) N-n-n-nozomi... 5 I wonder, what would have happened if Nozomi hadn't saved me? 6 (Larger font) But, 7 I wonder if I really did go too far this time... 8 Thinking of Umi being drunk like that really got me excited... 9 N-n <3 009.png ------- 1 (try doing the ellipsis vertical) (Handwritten) Aa... <3 2 Ha!? 3 (Same thing with the ellipsis here) (Handwritten) Fuah... <3 4 W-what are you doing Eli-chika...! 5 Though... nobody else is in this shower room... 6 Umi really is cute, especially when she acts like that 7 E... Eli <3 8 What did I even think would happen between us... 9 Maybe while we're still here, on this trip... <3 010.png ------- 1 (Handwritten) Nn-nh... <3 2 (Handwritten) Nn-nh... <3 3 I'm sorry Umi... I'm just... 4 (Handwritten) Fu-ah... 5 I'm so... <3 6 (Mouthbreather BB) Aaa.. <3 7 Nn-n... <3 8 This is so wrong... but Umi is just too adorable 9 (Handwritten Bold) Haa <3 10 (Mouthbreather BB) N-ah <3 11 (Mouthbreather BB) A-ah <3 12 My body won't stop moving <3 13 Umi... Umi <3 I can't help myself <3 14 (Mouthbreather BB) (You can probably pop this out of the bubble a bit) N-ah! <3 15 Umi... I-I'm going to come... /// 011.png ------- 1 Who's coming where? 1.5 (Thin SFX font) _hic_ 2 Uwah--! U-uumi?! 3 (Mouthbreather BB, huge) Ha!? 4 I think I'm starting to understand now 5 After earlier, you come to the shower by yourself... And like this... it seems obvious, doesn't it? 6 Could it be that you really *hic* love me like this? 7 That's not... 8 No, I can't believe... she's drunk again !? 9 You're soaked down here, I bet you we thinking of our earlier incident, no? 10 (handwritten font) Isn't that why you're in the shower? 11 Not there, that's <3 Umi, don't <3 12 U-fufu, there's no way I could pass up a taste like this <3 012.png ------- 1 (Mouthbreather BB) Uaah!? 2 Hyah! <3 3 Ahn <3 4 Hya <3 5 Fuck, you're eating me out like a dog... Ahh... <3 6 Okay, I'm not going to hold back 7 You really wanted these dirty things, didn't you? Then I'll give them to you <3 8 Ha-ah <3 9 (Handwritten) Umi-i <3 Hah... You have to... stop... /// 10 You know I can't... Your sweet-warm honey, the taste of _you_ is just flowing out... <3 11 Umi... not there... not... 12 I'm not going to let up <3 013.png ------- 1 Your tongue is... digging all inside me 2 (Mouthbreather) Ahhn <3 3 Aah... Umi, please... not... If you keep this up... 4 U-umi I'm coming! <3 5 (Mouthbreather BB) I'm coming... Rya-a-ah <3 6 I'll come... don't, ahh... 7 Ah! <3 8 N-na <3 9 Aah... 10 Fu-yah... 11 When you climaxed just now... you clenched up so amazingly tight <3 12 I haven't yet... I'm the only one touching my _body_... 13 U-umi... 14 Nmu <3 014.png ------- 1 Fuu <3 2 N-mu <3 3 N-ha <3 4 Ha-haa <3 5 F... 6 Forgive me Umi... I've shown you Eli-chi's dirty side... <3 7 I've seen your shamelessness... and now I can't *hic* hold back 8 Nnh <3 9 For me to forgive you bad behavior... you need to make us feel good together *hic* <3 10 ... u, 11 Umi... <3 12 I *hic* won't need these anymore 13 ... ! 14 *hic* Aren't you going to *hic* go on? 015.png ------- 1 Nn <3 2 Fu-ah <3 3 (Mouthbreather BB) H-yah <3 4 N-mi <3 ...fu-i <3 5 Ha... aaaah 6 E-eli... <3 7 N-fuu <3 8 N...nnn <3 9 Nn... ahn <3 10 Yaah <3 11 I'm kissing Umi's firm breasts with my own... This feels so good... <3 12 Ah, a-amazing <3 016.png ------- 1 ?... Umi 2 Does this not feel good? 3 No... it, 4 It does feel good /// 5 Ah, I'm glad This time... 6 How about we kiss a little differently <3 7 Aah... <3 8 This must just be my imagination... <3 9 Hyah... /// 10 Like this? 11 Fuah <3 12 Aah <3 13 Oh my... Umi you're too good! <3 14 Haa <3 15 How's this? It's cramped but somehow it's easy to move like this, isn't it? 16 N-yeah <3 17 Hah... <3 18 H-ah... /// E-eli and I are are rubbing our clitoris, how dirty <3 017.png ------- 1 Ah-mu... 2 Nnn... <3 3 Fuu <3 4 Uuu... <3 5 Ahmm 6 Nnn 7 ... <3 8 Hahh <3 9 N-hah... Eli... Eli... // 10 I'm... <3 11 U-umi... Umi <3 12 Hyah... <3 13 Haa 14 Ah <3 15 Eli... I'm going to... 16 Nn <3 17 Me... too... this time let's come together... <3 18 N-ah... ah... <3 018.png ------- 1 Gyaa 2 Ah, I'm coming! Hyaa! 3 Ahh-hyah! 4 Ahh! 5 Umi-chan~? 6 Where did she wonder off too... 7 Ah-ah-ahn! 8 Hyah?! 019.png ------- 1 I'm sure it's not... 2 Eli-chi?~ I'm coming in~ 3 WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?! /// 4 N-nozomi... 5 Several hours later... 6 She was so drunk and tired... 7 ... but _that_ Umi's face... but I'm sure she's sobered up by now 8 Eli... I was faded off that carbonated water and showed her all my true feelings... 9 No, it was not dream... but what will happen now? 10 Don't ask about it, I won't ask about it... /// 11 That night 12 Nobody in the hotel experienced anything so ponderous 020.png ------- 1 Would you rather do it by yourself or with me? 2 Time for punishment? <3 3 Nnn <3 4 Ahh <3 5 Fuah <3 6 Ha-ah <3 Eh <3 Haa <3 Don't stop <3